How to Ask a Career Center for Resume Feedback in English With a Target Role

A polite request for resume feedback can still be too vague to help. Could you review my resume? sounds fine, but it gives the advisor very little direction. They do not know whether you are applying for internships or full-time roles, whether the target is data, product, finance, or consulting, or whether the real problem is bullet clarity, project framing, or how your international-student context changes the story you need to tell.

A stronger email gives the role before the request. Say what you are applying for, what part of the resume feels weak, and what kind of review would help most. Maybe you are aiming at a data-analyst internship and you are unsure whether your coursework sounds too academic. Maybe you want a product role, but your project bullets do not show ownership clearly enough. Those details help the career center decide whether to focus on structure, positioning, or evidence of impact.

If you have already applied to several roles, mention the signal briefly. No interviews yet. Some interviews, but the resume still reads like class work. Different versions for different roles that still feel flat. That context changes the kind of feedback that matters. Easydue can help compress translated politeness and make the request sound more natural, but the useful part is still the specific problem you are inviting the advisor to solve.